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016: The rain greets/me like a young...

DateWednesday, November 10, 2010 at 5:03AM

The rain greets

me like a young

girl weeping in

a strange place.

Latching on to

me for comfort needing

intimacy needing to

feel safe, and that

child I could hold

tightly and make her

feel secure but

how can you embrace

the rain.

 

 

 

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