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Nov152010

091: Stop being an audience!/You're making me nervous...

DateMonday, November 15, 2010 at 8:45AM

Stop being an audience!

You're making me nervous

 

I want participants

 

Come with me past

this stage, past these syllables

 

these words are not poetry

 

This communion

this merging of intent

and attention

is structure flowing

and brings life, brings voice

to this emptiness

of words

 

 

 

©2010 by Jonathan Neske

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