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Nov162010

105: How can you not want to/Strip down,...

DateTuesday, November 16, 2010 at 4:08AM

How can you not want to

 

Strip down,

          Jump in,

 

                    and Swim

in this river flowing all

around you?

 

The confines of your mind is a ditch

 

All this mystery

I try to tell you

is a great ocean too

big to say!

 

Surrender to the current

and it will take you there

 

Listen to the voice of water

resistance here will drown you

 

 

 

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