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181: the first step/the first stone of the walk...

DateSunday, November 21, 2010 at 2:01AM

the first step

the first stone of the walk

the first step

           on the first stone

                      of the walk

the first step

the first stepping

the picking up and placing down of

the first stride

the first treading

            and it begins

 



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