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253: A jumbo jet materializes/suddenly...

DateFriday, May 13, 2011 at 2:22AM

A jumbo jet materializes

 

          suddenly

 

                     from the clouds

 

and because of

           the exact

                    differences

           of our speeds

 

          it seems to just  hang  there

 

like a lazy dragon

that gravity refuses to fuck with

 

 

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